Further Story-boarding

Further Story-boarding...

Having discussed the previous idea of the crazed painter further, we decided as a group that as good as we could have made it, the sequence would have been boring to film and very difficult to get perfect. Instead we came up with the idea of a woman walking to her car from a supermarket in the late afternoon, but something isn't quite right. No one is around and it seems as if she's being watched and followed. She notices this and speeds up her walk into the car park where a door slams, making her even more uneasy. Having placed her shopping in the boot, she finally gets in her car. However when she looks to her left the car next to her has a dead body in it/ blood on the window.

Not only would this story be more interesting to film, as it uses a wider range of shots, It also has more potential to show off a multitude of camera skills and editing techniques to build up the tension necessary for the final twist. This idea will most likely be the one we stick with. It's realistically doable, we have people who can play the parts and we have a car park that we can use. However our current dilemma involves the ending of the sequence. We have two options; the original, in which she looks over to the car to the right and sees a body, followed by a cut to black or the new idea, in which she goes to inspect blood on the window to then find the body.